short and nice poem... but the first two lines like a bit weird... i mean not ryhme enough... these two lines isit combined to one sentence or isit seperate de?... but overall not bad... quite good... =]
ok...The first 2 are combine de....hahas....thanks
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short and nice poem... but the first two lines like a bit weird... i mean not ryhme enough... these two lines isit combined to one sentence or isit seperate de?... but overall not bad... quite good... =]
ok...The first 2 are combine de....hahas....thanks
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