Melancholy Angel

My first proper long poem that has chorus that appears twice.I was thinking of writing a normal length poem like the one before but it turn out to be this.So think can consider it as a song?HAHA!Maybe after I had master my chords,this will be my first composition?Who knows

Kinda Sad one.
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(Verse 1)
Applying strength to the chords,
Mind overflow with melancholy thoughts.
Why can't I always get what I sought?
Fingertips on the left had felt sore,
Uncomparable to the one felt in the core.
Till they had finally bleed,
You still unaware that You're the one I need.


(Chorus)
Someday You will finally know
The efforts I had sow.
That will not turn cold
Even till the day I become Old and Yellow.


(Verse 2)
Walking alone often makes me sigh;
Composing end up makes me cry
Streams of Blood will someday,dry.
Dandelions will somehow,lie;
And Prayers to my heart will never die.

(Chorus)
Someday You will finally know
The efforts I had sow.
That will not turn cold
Even till the day I become Old and Yellow.

(Bridge)

You should know,and ought to know

My feelings are wine that gushes from barrels

They can't cease to flow

And at least my efforts wont lie low.

(Ending)

I may not be there when the weather's colder;

not the one to be with you till you gets older

but will always be the Angel on your Shoulder.

*The spacing got a bit of error when the piece reached the last 2/3-3/4 of the poem.

15th post for this blog.Feel like writing cause got inspiration.
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Look at the twirling pencil,
I start drifting away into my own world;
Looking at your departure,
my tears left my swollen eyes' rupture.
Can't it be salvage?
Words,stupidity of my unreasonable rage.
I could no longer feel the warmth;
the sensation I always sought.
Nothing left except your absence;
Merit for my own Foolishness.
You had already threw in your towel;
since our relationship turns sour.
Being a fact,nothing but swallow;
hope it's gonna be shallow;
in order for our Love to keep on the glow.

No Confidence

Quite some time didn't come le.A bit of emotional drop,is it due to hormonal imbalance in my body?LOL!

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I can't bring myself forward,
I find it rather perturbed.

I felt pain on my left chest
it seriously don't feels the best;
How I wish I can let it rest.

Can't muster the courage within,
succumb to the fear in between.

Unsure.Uncertainty.Ambigous.

Friends....

I always wanted a peer
someone who can be my listening ear.
Advises me when I'm unsure,
guide me through when i need a teacher,
and Help me when I need a teacher.
I appreciate your effort and will remember you forever.

~Jason~

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Hi Guys!This site sure rot till it become part of the fossil fuel,I guess.However,I saved it today and hope I have more ideas in Posting in the near future.=]]Enjoy reading=]]
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Dragged the feet along the shore,
waiting for you to give me a call.

Torrential rain caressed my face.
Recalling those enjoyable days,
Heartwrenching,is the word that I can ONLY say.

My Dear,you said that we are through.
What else can I do?
Continue to remain my cool?
Isn't it hard to oblige to?

I had nothing else to care,
No more joy to share,
Cause you are no longer there.

-Jason